How to Write a Motivation Letter That Actually Gets You the Scholarship

A strong motivation letter isn’t about fancy words - it’s about a clear story that sounds like you
Author: Schology Editorial

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Last Updated:
September 15, 2025
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You open the application portal.
Everything looks manageable… until you see it:

“Please upload your motivation letter (max. 1–2 pages).”

Instant panic. What do they even want you to say? How “motivated” do you have to sound? And how do you stand out when hundreds of other students are writing the exact same thing?

Let’s calm this down.

A good motivation letter is not about sounding fancy or using big words. It’s about showing a real human being behind the application — someone who knows why they’re applying and what they’ll do with the opportunity.

In this guide, we’ll walk through a simple structure you can follow, with concrete examples and a checklist at the end.

What Scholarship Committees Actually Want to See

Before you start writing, it helps to know what’s happening on the other side.

Most committees are looking for four things:

  • Clarity – Do you know what you want, or are you just applying to everything?
  • Fit – Are you a good match for this specific scholarship and program?
  • Motivation – Do you genuinely care, or are you copy-pasting the same text everywhere?
  • Future impact – Will this scholarship actually help you do something meaningful?

Your motivation letter is where you answer all of that in 1–2 pages.

Step 1: Get Clear Before You Start Writing

Open a blank page and answer these questions in bullets first. No full sentences, just ideas.

  1. Why this field/program?
    • What made you interested in it?
    • Any personal story or moment that pushed you in this direction?
  2. Why this university/scholarship?
    • Specific courses, professors, labs, or projects?
    • Any values or mission that match your goals (e.g., sustainability, innovation, social impact)?
  3. Why you?
    • What experiences, skills, or achievements show you’re serious?
    • What have you already done — even if it’s small (volunteering, part-time job, side project)?
  4. What will you do with this opportunity?
    • How will this scholarship change your life or your family’s situation?
    • What’s your long-term goal, and how does this program help you get there?

These notes will become your paragraphs later and keep you from writing something generic.

Step 2: Use a Simple, Clear Structure

Here’s an easy structure that works for most motivation letters:

  1. Opening: Who you are + your main goal
  2. Why this program / scholarship
  3. Why you (your experience + strengths)
  4. What you’ll do with the opportunity (future plans + impact)
  5. Closing: short, confident, grateful

Let’s break that down.

1. Opening: Start Like a Human, Not a Robot

Skip the “Dear Sir/Madam, my name is…” style for a moment. Start with something that actually says something about you.

Weak opening:

I am writing this letter to apply for the XYZ Scholarship.

Stronger opening:

When I helped my younger siblings study by candlelight during power cuts, I realized how much education can change a family’s future — and how easily it can be blocked by money.

After 2–3 sentences like this, you can introduce yourself:

My name is [Name], a [nationality] student currently studying [your field/level], and I am applying for the [Scholarship Name] to continue my studies in [program / country].

2. Explain Why This Program / Scholarship

This is where many students go vague:

I want to study at your university because it is one of the best.

That tells them nothing.

Instead, show that you’ve done your homework:

  • Mention specific courses, tracks, or professors.
  • Refer to labs, projects, or values that match your interests.
  • Connect it to your past experience or future plans.

Example:

I am particularly drawn to the Master’s in Environmental Engineering at [University] because of its focus on practical water management solutions in developing regions. The course “Sustainable Urban Drainage Systems” and the research group led by Dr. [Name] align directly with my goal of improving flood resilience in my home city.

For the scholarship, add 2–3 lines about why this funding matters:

The [Scholarship Name] is more than financial support for me; it is the only realistic path for me to continue my education abroad, as my family cannot support the tuition and living costs.

3. Show Why You Are a Strong Candidate

Now you connect the dots: your past → this program → your future.

You don’t need to list every detail from your CV. Choose 3–4 key things:

  • Academic strengths (grades, specific subjects, projects)
  • Relevant experience (internships, volunteering, jobs, competitions)
  • Skills and qualities (leadership, responsibility, resilience, teamwork)

Example paragraph:

During my Bachelor’s, I consistently ranked in the top 10% of my class in subjects related to data analysis and statistics. I completed a research project on predicting crop yields using satellite data, which I presented at our university’s student conference. Outside the classroom, I volunteered with a local NGO that trains farmers to use simple digital tools to track their harvests. These experiences strengthened both my analytical skills and my commitment to using technology for social impact.

If you don’t have “fancy” experience, focus on responsibility and initiative:

I have been working part-time as a cashier since high school to support my family. Balancing full-time studies with work has taught me discipline, time management, and the importance of financial independence — qualities I will bring with me if I am selected for this scholarship.

4. Describe What You’ll Do with the Opportunity

This is your “future” paragraph. Committees want to know what happens after they invest in you.

Try to answer:

  • What do you want to do 3–5 years after graduation?
  • How will this program and scholarship help you get there?
  • Who benefits from your success (community, country, specific group)?

Example:

If selected, I plan to specialize in renewable energy policy and return to [home country] to work with local municipalities on designing realistic, affordable energy transition plans. In the long term, my goal is to contribute to national policy discussions so that rural communities like mine are not left behind in the process.

Avoid clichés like “I want to make the world a better place” unless you explain how.

5. Closing: Confident, Short, and Grateful

End clearly and politely — not dramatically.

Example closing:

In summary, this scholarship would enable me to access an education that I cannot afford on my own and to develop the skills I need to contribute to [specific field or community]. Thank you very much for considering my application. I would be honored to represent the values of the [Scholarship Name] as a dedicated and hardworking student.

One short paragraph is enough.

Step 3: Avoid These Common Mistakes

Here are things that instantly weaken a motivation letter:

  • Copy-pasting the same letter for every scholarship
    (Committees can feel when it’s not written for them.)
  • Repeating your CV
    Use the letter to tell the story behind your CV, not to list everything again.
  • Writing like a robot
    Overly formal, complicated language makes it harder to read, not more impressive.
  • Being vague
    “I am passionate about biology” is weak. “I spent my weekends helping in a local lab mapping plant diseases” is stronger.
  • Only talking about money
    Financial need is important, but also show your goals, potential, and impact.

Step 4: A Simple Paragraph-by-Paragraph Template

You can adapt this to almost any scholarship:

  1. Paragraph 1 – Hook + who you are
    • Short personal story or moment
    • Name, background, what you’re applying for
  2. Paragraph 2 – Why this program/university
    • Specific reasons (courses, professors, projects)
    • How they match your interests
  3. Paragraph 3 – Why this scholarship
    • Why their support matters for your situation
    • Why this scholarship fits your profile/values
  4. Paragraph 4–5 – Why you
    • Key academic or practical experiences
    • Skills and qualities that show you’ll use the opportunity well
  5. Paragraph 6 – Future plans
    • What you want to do after the program
    • How this scholarship helps you create impact
  6. Paragraph 7 – Closing
    • One short summary + thank you

Step 5: Quick Checklist Before You Submit

Before you upload your letter, go through this list:

  • Is it 1–2 pages max, with clear paragraphs?
  • Did you mention the scholarship and program by name?
  • Did you include specific details (courses, projects, experiences) instead of vague phrases?
  • Does the letter sound like you when you read it out loud?
  • Have you asked at least one person to read it and give feedback?
  • Did you check spelling, grammar, and the scholarship’s word/page limit?

Image idea: Small checklist graphic students can screenshot or save.

Final Thoughts (and a Little Push)

Writing a motivation letter can feel intimidating, but it’s not about being “perfect.” It’s about being clear, honest, and specific about who you are and what you want.

You’re not trying to impress them with big words. You’re trying to help them think:

“Yes, this is exactly the kind of student we want to support.”

Want Help With Your Motivation Letter?

If you’d like another pair of eyes on your draft, Schology can help you:

  • Turn your ideas into a clear, powerful story
  • Fix structure, clarity, and tone (without losing your voice)
  • Make sure your letter actually fits the scholarship you’re applying for

👉 Check out our Motivation Letter & Essay Review service on Schology and get feedback before you hit “submit.”

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